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In the corridor

in the corridor
of the place of learning
you kissed me

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credit: http://danny-deviant.deviantart.com/art/Romance-37024994

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A contest entry

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  • Unsigned gold member
    January 8
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    and then.....cmon I wanna know more

    Well done

    Good luck


    Simon


  • Kari gold member
    December 13, 2008

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    That is a very sweet take on the prompt. It's short but it totally says it all in those words right there.
    Best of luck in the contest.