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pull the plug

im here barely breathing not even holding on still but something wont let me die... please just pull the plug

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Written February 8th, 2004

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  • FalseReality
    February 16, 2004
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    There are times in my life were I feel as if I need to scream "Let me go... Let me leave this pain that inturrupts my everyday life." No one listen's to my pleas. But, I guess that the hard times make you stronger... Even though at times I feel so helpless. This was beautiful. Short and to the point, just how I like them. Keep your head up and the pen down. FalseReality