all i know of you is what she's said to me
in broken words scattered along, dipped in blood
and a fractured spirit lying in all its lonely pieces—
broken because it doesn't matter.
apparently.
all i know is what she's told me.
that's enough to make me hate you.
i'm the big bad wolf and you're breaking my sister—
member number two of my threefold pack.
don't you dare hurt her like they hurt me.
don't you dare.
Author notes
AP name— AllThatRemains
I think it's crappy, but at least it's short, yeah?
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Comments
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Although we trust peoples words sometimes it's just best to find out for yourself how awful someone is, as much as it's difficult. Some things go without saying though.
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A sad but well written piece.
I enjoyed reading it and hope that you do
well with it in these contests! Take care!
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Thank you!
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it is so not crappy. i like the way you expressed what you felt. i loved it.
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Aww, yay. Thank you.
-gives jelly baby-
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thats freaking sad!
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Well, that's what I was going for.
That for which I was going. Anyway. Thank you!
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ps
put your ap name in your author notes please
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Sorry. So I just put AllThatRemains in my A/N?
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i don't think this is crappy at all, I like it very much. It's very unique and true and is presented in a great way. I love the first stanza best, it has great images and metaphors.
awesome job,
cassie
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Nee, thankies.
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It's not crappy.
It's sweet. A bit scary *chuckles* but sweet nonetheless.
Glad you're willing to stick up for me, sister of mine.
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