For those who remember, the world will listen to all their worries and woes.
For those who remember, the world will care for them.
For those who remember, you bring peace to those who fought for your freedom.
For those who remember,no matter what someone will care for you.
For those who remember, you have earned the freedom to talk.
For those who don't remember, the world could care less.
A contest entry
- What does this picture mean to you? by Soft-Rain.
800 points, ended December 17, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
tell me what you think. i am only 12 years old.
Comments
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goodjob on the HM!
i agree with you, it is quite moving. i ilke it
the last line is like a punch to the face. the repetition of the other lines makes such an impact and when the last line is different it makes the poem so strong
great job
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Thanks!
Glad you won HM for this! Hope you enjoy your time here at AP & that you grow as a poet. It takes time to learn how to post a poem for maximal impact & to learn how to use your grammar and punctuation well. Your in a fine place to learn & I applaud you for your desire to write & share your thoughts with others! Bravo!!! 
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I like it.
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This poem means a lot to me. for a reason im unsure but it moves me....odd isn't it?
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