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He Tells Me What To Do (2004)

He told me-
.told me what to do-
..never had a doubt-
...and why?
....he was never wrong before.

.....So when he told me-
......said it must be done-
.......there was no choice-
........No hesitation-
.........No need to ask why-
..........I just did it.

...........And when he told me-
............I'd have to do it again-
............that seemed right-
...........after that first time.
..........So I did it once more-
.........and soon-
........why soon I was doing it-
.......all the time.

......My little hand puppet-
.....he tells me-
....whispers in my ear-
...forbidden things-
..tells me these things to do-
.and I do them-
wouldn't you?

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  • pixiestix gold member
    March 11

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    What is it exactly the puppet is telling you to do?

    Okay, this one is weird


    • Yemassee gold member
      March 11
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      Like your prose you wrote for class, I don't tell what.


    • Yemassee gold member
      March 11
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      You don't want to know, it's too shameful.

      I used to have a cute bunny rabbit puppet photo thingie.