I lay here in the quiet of the night
listening to the deep rhythmic breathing
of your beautiful slumber, endearing...
your sweet, musical voice whispering
words of unadulterated passion in my ear
whispers of a sensual rain, cascading...
your gentle arms wrapped lovingly around
my supple body as we bathe in the afterglow
loving you more with each breath, consuming
I awake to your head upon my breast
inhaling your special scent while you sleep
together, forever...please stay...
A contest entry
- Through the Fire and Flames (we carry on) by MYsecondchance.
800 points, ended January 4, 17 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ~*~Be My Muse~*~ by Zane Rose.
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text, prompt #1
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This is a beautiful poem. I love the feeling and wording. You did a great job.
Good luck and keep up the great writing!
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nice poem. ^.^
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Love it! You did an amazing job fitting so much emotion and so much passion into so few lines. One of the greatest feelings in the world, isn't it?
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wow what an amazing piece so powerful with just a few lines
plus this fits one other prompt the twilight one if yu have read the book or seen the movie you'll see it to.
any way thanks very much for entering!!!! -
Alright, I have officially decided that I REALLY love this!!
It was a big official descision...I don't think you got the memo
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This is so well written so very beautiful and romantic sis!!!! I love it!!!! You did such a very very beautiful job writing and portraying this piece!!!! I love ur details and descriptions!!!!! This is truly lovely!!!! Its so very very loving and sweet!!!! You did a very incredible job with this write!!!! I love it!!! I LOVE U SO MUCH SIS BIG BIG HUGS AND KISSES!!!!!!!!!
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