We awoke, yesterday, after death
to find ourselves coated deep in dark red;
lieing alone in a mountain river bed,
color dripping from her lips
and my eyes spilling out their shame.
Her fingers, where she hid the thievery
were covered in the clay,
and my legs, which had taken me places
no man should ever be
were coated in dark red.
My chest, full with pride, with fear, and with rage
had filled been up with the things
I had done as I had lived,
and her head, made blood-like with a thousand thoughts
was coated red with skin.
Then a man of brilliant white stepped down
to the riverbed where we lay,
and my soul was shot through in terror
at the red that covered me,
knowing full well that I was a man of stain
and my lover as stained as me.
I knelt and wept, then
for fear and for what we should have been
in a life offered free.
But the man stood and spoke
with the voice of fires and kings.
He spoke, saying our cry was heard
and the red would soon be cleaned.
So I waited, still dripping with the clay
for something to come and wash the dark
red that covered me.
And long was the wait, there by that mountain stream
With my lover coated in my arms
and the body covering me.
Then, a mighty rush of water
like a wave from massive seas
coursed across the riverbed
and battered life into me,
stripping the dark red from along my chest
and her heart and hands
to send us singing free.
Author notes
Needs something. I'll have to come back to it...
-thefallout
www.theeverlastingfallout.com/read
A contest entry
- wash me... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended December 13, 2008, 12 entries
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Humm..indeed a fascinating description..thoughtful work..well done..and thank you so muhfor the wonderful poem..

