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I Am Jacks

You can drink me with a mix
on the rocks or simply straight
Sip, pour or skull me down
its you, who decides your fate
When you drink too much of me
your words you tend to slur
Then wake up in the morning
with last night just a blur
I can be drank during the day
but generally at nights
Helped some people fall in love
and caused many, many fights
Very nice bourbon I am
Jack Daniels is my name
Many a redneck has gone to jail
and I have got the blame
Lots of men have befriended me
when they`ve fallen from the tracks
Over time I`ve had many names
but quite simply, I am Jacks

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  • suzume
    December 14, 2008

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    Very unique take on the prompt. I wouldn't have gone to that immediately, but I can appreciate that someone did. ^_-

    Thanks for entering