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winter

Winter

Winter is laughing. She is on her way.
Late precise river, pleads to lost gods.
Shadow harsh dimension. A perfect calculus.
Rock journeyed currents, and an autumn bridge.

Late precise river, pleads to lost gods..
Dark concrete eyes. A pear-bright chemise.
Rock journeyed currents and an autumn bridge.
Water spirits beckon April and dreams.

Dark concrete eyes. A pear-bright chemise.
Steel bright summer. Such a pale creation.
Water spirits beckon April and dreams.
Repeat this frame. An arrowed fragrance.

Steel bright summer. Such a pale creation.
Should we summon the moon? It's so quiet.
Repeat this frame. An arrowed fragrance.
Yesterday is a wedding. Clear star highway.

Should we summon the moon? It's so quiet.
Crystal geese fly back into spring.
Yesterday is a wedding. Clear star highway.
Winter is laughing. She is on her way.

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  • Danna Hobart
    January 5
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    I have no idea what an arrowed fragrance is.

    Thanks for entering.


  • Neha Sharma silver member
    December 22, 2008
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    nice one. Thanks for entering
    good wishes
    -Neha