Across the poppy fields
Where we first used to play
Shared a picnic on a summer day
Love came so easy
As the poppies swayed
Now my littered dreams are floating away
Winter came and the poppy fields are gone
You left me all alone and I now feel alone
When will you return to me
I cross the fields night and day
For the poppies won't come back
Now my littered dreams have gone away
Spring is here again
The field is lush and green
The poppies will soon be in bloom
I wait and dream of you
The sky is covered with clouds of gray
My littered dreams are about to go away
A contest entry
- Heart first: by Randomly Beautiful.
1000 points, ended January 24, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Good Write bro
I would change 1 thing
"You left me all alone and I now feel alone"
I would drop the first alone
You left me so now I feel all alone- maybe
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Sounds like you have fond memories some a little sad. Lovely poem. Good luck in the contest.
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