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The Stream Sings


A precious percussion
quickens my heart,
fingers of fluid ice
stroking faultless skin,
bringing with a sigh,
endless orgasm of awareness
and finally feeling alive.

As my body tingles,
the stream sings its song,
a laughing lullaby,
with spreading smiles
for sunrise and sunset
and whispered words,
comforting the darkest night.

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  • Angelflower
    December 21, 2008

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    This had a wonderful feel to it that I truly enjoyed. While reading it was almost like it should be whispered, (if that makes sense lol) you truly did a wonderful job, thank you very much for sharing. Best of luck in the contest.

    Angel


  • hotchocolate gold member
    December 12, 2008

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    I love it!!!! Good luck to you in the contest hon