My mind's a blank
I fall into a dismal hole
Release me!
Trapped
Motionless
I lay here, dying
Haunted by images
Petrifying
I scream out loud
No one can hear
Laying on this floor
Naked and bare
Stripped of dignity
Tormented by demons
My demons
I'm screaming
As the darkness envelopes me
Help me
Love me
Protect me
Save me
Author notes
This poem is weird and probably makes no sense, but it kinda just flowed onto the paper and I went with the flow.
It's basically about being taken over by your demons and wanting to be saved but no one's there to help you... no one cares.
I don't know, it's sorta strange.
=]
Do you like it? Be nice, please.
Comments
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Nicely done, I enjoyed this, we've all been there, well I know I have.
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Great poem. I can feel the sadness and dispair in it. It feels like you are being overcome by everything. I've felt like this before. It's a very dark feeling.
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Wow, this is really deep. I really like this very much. The emotion in this is so powerful my favorite lines were
"My demons
I'm screaming
As the darkness envelopes me
Help me
Love me
Protect me
Save me"
That's screams out to me one word: Brilliant
keep up the super great work
- Green Tiger
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Thanks. =D
Thanks so much.
Your comment meant a lot.
=D
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that was awsome!!
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thanks a lot! =]
I would give you five stars but they aren't showing any on the botton of your picture...
x.X
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This is very good. I think it flows and I think it makes sense. Its very well written.
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