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Silence

Silence,
The dark approaches,
Breathing, seething,
Waiting for you,
Consuming, assuming,
All that you do.

Silence,
You hide away,
Crying, lieing,
Wishing for life,
Devouring, cowering,
Wasteing your life.

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  • RawrItsKrista
    December 12, 2008
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    I like this a lot. It has a lot of emotion and pain in it.
    I like the flow of it too.
    =]