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Not So Simple

Boundless,missing,
searching.

Soul, lost in eternity.

Reaching out to darkness,
I find nothing,
grasp no concept,
no who's ,what's, or why's.

I don't know how long I've been here.

It's summer, yet I swear the snow is falling.

Then I realize, the angels are coming,
falling gracefully from the sky
to find me.

Still, I'm grasping at nothing.
Bound to nothing.

Author notes

((6)) "Emptiness is the feeling of wanting yourself to feel when it won't let you." Hikari lady

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  • Hikari Lady
    December 25, 2008

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    Nice take on the prompt, short and made me feel like you're sitting in a dark room searching blindly. Wonderful images you've created in my mind.
    Thanks for entering and best of luck in the contest.

    Much love
    ~Noor