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Winter

Sister, Sister, can’t you tell,
That we, the winter, are the belle!
We own the world, and we conquer it,
The earth is our domain.

We control it Sister dear,
We are the rulers of this time.
All through December through March, we own this land,
And all will bow to our command. 

Until our cousin, Spring, comes around,
We will spread our white throughout our found.
But when she comes do not fear,
For  we shall come again next year!

Author notes

okay i don't know if this counts as a fairy tale but its about winter faeries, so yeah enjoy, lol

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  • awww. This is really sweet. The backround really helped with the feeling of winter for me. This was beautiful.
    Rose


  • Treasure 5 gold member
    April 21

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    Where the nature treasures and fairyland? This was nice any way, the directions was pretty clear.It was a pleasure to read.


  • Umi Juvariel
    March 25

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    Hmm, winter faeries...I like. This poem made me happy. I like how short you kept it, but how you made sure it didn't feel short-coming. Excellent write and good luck in my contest.


  • just4fun20
    March 12
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    good and very original i liked it alot


  • islekine gold member
    January 29
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    Well, I prefer summer! lol

    Lovely wintertime thoughts!
    Best wishes in the contest and always.
    Write on!


  • geckogirl silver member
    January 24
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    nice winter write.. good luck


  • aboomer silver member
    January 24

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    Enchanting! I like your take on winter - although I have to admit, the cousin Spring is more my favorite 'relative'...lol
    nicely done

    thank you for your entry
    best wishes


  • Denerica
    January 17

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    Refreshing, different take about winter, but sorry I can't wait until their cousin Spring comes to visit. Blessings.


  • XxVampirePoetxX
    December 12, 2008
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    that was wonderful! absolutly delightful! i loved it!

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