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Mummy

Caressing the soft round bump
Which has overlapped my tummy
My heart fills with joy; a lump
Catches in my thoat; I stare lovingly
At the roundness who will call me 'Mummy'

Smiles shared fleetingly with my love
Tender touches from heart to heart
Our baby'll be beautiful as a dove
And when the painful contractions start
It'll all be worthwhile; love shoots like a dart

And when I'm finally cradling my baby
Protecting it in my sinewy, cosy arms
Maybe once in a while; sometimes maybe
I'll think upon this love, and feel calm:
Thinking I'll forever keep my child safe from harm.

Author notes

Written for an awesome baby shower competition.

A contest entry

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Comments


  • blueyez
    December 15, 2008
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    I can't wait to cradle my baby and see what he looks like Thank you!!!!
    Peace and Love


  • HopeForUnity
    December 12, 2008
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    just the right amount of sop
    well done and best of luck


  • little-hug
    December 12, 2008

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    This is beautiful. I love the gentle flow of the words and the rhyming is excellent. Stunning imagery too. The perfect poem for a baby shower competition. Lots of luck in it!