Simplicity
Transformed
Into
The
Complex
Hiding
Everything
Desirable
Heated
Emotions
Alter
Real
Truth
Author notes
Its the best I could come up with while being sick.
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A contest entry
- Your AP name in Acrostic by Paloszoo.
1000 points, ended December 26, 2008, 54 entries
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your first impressions?
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Short and great
Love it few words tons of emotion and imagery... great job...
PKO
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i like the way you used the first letter of each word to create your interesting piece...i like what you have done here...very creative and a nice work...sometimes we can still work wonders even though we are sick
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Very very nice. I love how it can be a poem by itself, but still fits so well with the letters of your name. Good luck in the contest and excellent work here. You've very good x
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I like how this could be a sentence on its own, or a few lines of a poem, rather than just a jumbling of words starting with the proper letters for the acrostic. It certainly makes it stronger, and becomes an interesting interpretation of your username. Beautiful.
Well penned,
~lost
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thank you!
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thank you for your comment
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Very creative. Interesting flow concept. I enjoyed it! Thank you for sharing your AP name with me in such a special way. Good luck in the contest.
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Nice flow and use of few words. Blessings
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