Be on the lookout
Always aware
As she flies on past
Haunting the air
Leaving behind only
Those who tremble with fear
Respect this warning and hear:
Ever does she wander, sad and alone
She's always searching for a place to call home
Author notes
Lol, that was fun!
A contest entry
- Your AP name in Acrostic by Paloszoo.
1000 points, ended December 26, 2008, 54 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Precious~
Sounded like You had FUN
I Loveeeeeeeeee Acrostics and also Love reading them~
Adore the Energy You exude and the Message~
Woot!! especially the part-
Those who tremble with fear
Respect this warning and hear:
Bravo!!
Also Appreciate Your comment on my work~
Keep that quill dancing
Thank You for sharing Your Voice
Best wishes in all You do
with love & light~ Desire~*~
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"Ever does wander, sad and alone
She's always searching for a place to call home"
Wow. Strong images and emotions in this, I love how you've described yourself through your username. Beautifully done, your words are mournful and lasting.
Well penned,
~lost
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This would make for a great Halloween piece! Well done! Thank you for sharing your AP name with me in such a special way. Good luck in the contest.
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I felt your inner stength...may you find more joy.
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