Elapses then since dawn of time
The years of grace are spent
Falling out of love with gods
The drapes of heavens rent
Elapses swift, these precious few
Thoughts that seperate them from you
Elapses then, since dawn of time
The years of grace are past
All hope lies in unused minds
Our fates are sealed, failing fast
Author notes
Prompt: A seven letter word beginning with E, 10 lines or less
A contest entry
- Pick a word - Write a poem in 10 lines or less (E) by The Fun House.
1050 points, ended December 14, 2008, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Awesome job! The very last line is really powerful. I like your word usage here. (Elapses + Repitition = Greatness!) Keep up the great job!
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This is a very pretty piece of poetry. I like how it sort of takes you into it and dances with you. Creative and well done.
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