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Moon

Beautiful iridescence
Graces midnight skies
A murmered pearl intense
Caught in webbed disguise

            Black velvet embraces opal
            A graceful vision ours
            Earth responds to her pull
            Delighted, dancing through stars

            Her beauty fades to shadow
            The midnight mourns her loss
            Yet soon she rises aglow
            Purple mists sweet shift across

And beautiful iridescence
Again fills midnight skies
A murmered pearl intense
Caught in webbed disguise

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  • moonlitanime
    December 18, 2008
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    this poem makes me love the moon even more


  • azlyn gold member
    December 16, 2008

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    BEAUTIFUL!!! How I adore this blessing to the moon...your eyes and spirit bring her adoration sweet!!!

    LOVELY!!!


  • Dragonbabyx3
    December 15, 2008

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    ...... Speechless.

    This is a beautiful piece, The imagery you provided here, is exquisite. I love the form you used, as well as the Rhyme. Beautiful words! Thankyou for entering my contest, and Good Luck!


  • ladyhelenaofsorrows
    December 12, 2008

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    lovely!

    the imagery is vivid, and rhyme well executed. i love the repetition of the first stanza, and the line "the midnight mourns her loss". simply lovely!