Body and soul
Love lined in pain
Under full moon
Emotionally insane
Sad man crying
Morns broken love
Another rainy day
No sun shine above
Author notes
They say the blues
is nothing more,
than a man feeling down
about the good woman,
he once had.
AP Name: BluesMan
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I liked this poem. Short and said a lot
I liked the picture you used on deviantart. Very nice and a great picture. Great job on this and best of luck to you in my contest!
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Wow this is cool you write Acrostic's just like me (you make them rhyme) Witch is awesome I can't write anything that don't rhyme I hate when contests come up saying "No rhyme" >_< anyway another great write
I'm gonna keep reading -♥Amy♥
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nicely written. I like the picture of the moon. Thanks for sharing this with us and thanks for entering this into my contest.
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This breaks my heart. It's beautiful but, very sad at the same time. I know someone who has gone through this personally. Great name.
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sounds like you honey bunch Hugs Angel♥
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What a deep and emotional piece. I like the rhyme and rhythm in this, it pulls it all together. Your words are strong and touch the heart, and your imagery is powerful.
Well penned,
~lost
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Very lovely take on the prompt! I definitely like the picture you chose to complement it! Thank you for sharing your AP name with me in such a special way. Good luck in the contest.
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You have no idea how this touched my heart. I love blues, and this had that smokey harmonica feel to it. hmm hmm hm hmmmm hm.
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You must have looked at my page or you made a good guess, because I've been playing the Blues Harmonica for 36 years now. Thank you for the wonderful comment
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I figured you played blues didn't know you blew harp.
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Nice picture prompt and the moving words to feeling the "blues", wish you more happiness in the future...Blessings
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This is a cool acrostic to match the picture, and i can feel how those words describe you, good luck in the contest and keep writing ~Amy
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I like the flow and rhyme of your poem.
You did a great job on your acrostic.
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