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Aubrun Fall

Auburn Fall
by Darmok 12/11/08

I found her face in Auburn fall
her hair the color of Autum.
and eyes of blue or topaz called,
a smile complete nor forgotten.

Author notes

Red hair and a lovely smile, I was inspired to write. A bit short and I feel there is more; I'll revist it again

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  • Pendemic
    September 17
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    Good start

    I agree it's shortness does not do the subject enough justice. It's a great start so many possibilities!