I won't be home tonight
Something came up
You said it couldn't happen
but it did and better then ever
Your sister sends her regards
her best friend is here too
we are enjoying the vacation
you said you didn't want
it is so much fun
before I forget it
the bank account is closed
you said you didn't marry me for my money
the credit cards, cancelled
the house sold
your mother bought it
for her new boytoy
the one you introduced her to
when you were threw with him
so you might have to move
don't think he likes you any more - either
Oh yes
your Mother gave me copies of the pictures
from when you said you were at your sister's weeding
and you said you would never do that
your sister and her friend both do it - too
I guess this is not so much a good bye as
get a life
sharing mine is over
Author notes
dedicated to my 1st & 2nd ex's
it didn't happen but the dream is sweeter then reality
beware of - Wind Walker
His bite IS worse then his bark
art from Deviant Art
the glass is always half ful by vaggelisf
A contest entry
- Dear Jane...you mother was better by Disturbed Prodigy.
700 points, ended January 3, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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LOL, honestly as a guy, i just have to applaud this one, this had some what happened to me, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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Sometimes the best revenge is a written piece and moving on. I liked the frankness and sarcasm here. I also liked the pic haha.
Your sister sends her regards
her best friend is here too
we are enjoying the vacation
you said you didn't want
it is so much fun
OUCH!!! HAHA
Great write!
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Thank You
I find the best revenge is to find something or someone to make me happy and let them see it. Their loss is someone else's gain and my happiness.
Thanks a million
Wind Walker
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please put your name in the Author notes
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My name is in the Author's notes
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sorry i missed it
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HAH! pay back!! i love it!
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Thank You
I'm sure everyone has dreamed up the perfect Dear John/Jane letter
I took a bit of truth from my family and made it into a work of art
Thanks for visiting and Happy Holidays
WW
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