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From Black to White

From black and white to color
I was changed
and it was so easy
to love you so
Something that I didnīt imagine was giving
my love with a glance.

Everything was afraid inside me
the universe wrote that you belong to me.
It was so easy to love you so,
something that I didnīt imagined
was to follow your love and suddenly
It happened and Iīm yours

Before I spend more time with you, honey
let me tell you that you are the love of my life.
Before I love you more listen please,
let me tell that all I give you
have not way to be explain
and if you donīt are here less
simply like that I felt
when I saw you

All of you is a surprise
from black and white to color
I become
I know that is not easy
Say "I love you"
I was not waiting for it,
but like this is the love
simply it happened and now Iīm all yours

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  • daviscth
    January 12

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    Oh wow this is a wonderful poem. Each sentence overflows with romantic words. Thanks for sharing in my contest.


  • Denerica silver member
    January 12

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    Honesty is best and it shows in this write. Everything is not black and white but now color is a wonderful concept.


  • JesusFreak92
    January 9

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    omg, u entered this in my contest?!?!?!?!?! i should've judged better!! this is great and eactly what i was looking for! i promise the next time u enter my contest i'll read urs first!