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Several Ways to Die Trying

I hope you never see the sun rise
over those neverending skies
and know there's someone who loves you
Like I did at one time.

I hope you choke and die.


But, for now, since we
aren't lucky enough to see
that happen for awhile,
I'll give you a smile,
and I'll say...
Have a nice day.

Author notes

Yes, I'm angry.
Yes, I'm pissed off.
Yes. I'm livid.


But it doesn't matter. You'll never be worth it enough to matter.


One thing that I've always wanted to say to you,
I'm glad I cheated. Otherwise, I'd still be stuck with you.



Your loss.
Fuck off.

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    January 9
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    Oh my goodness

    Hearts turned wrong side out .There are no winners


  • CoDyHoBz
    December 15, 2008
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    we all have hats but we all
    allways love them


  • CoDyHoBz
    December 15, 2008
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    omg lol i try to die but i cant nether hevan nor hell will let me in fr a visit

  • silence-the-random
    December 15, 2008
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    EVIL!!!

    EVIL!!!!!


  • wanderingstarlet
    December 12, 2008
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    he he he.... evil giggle. you are my luffles darling


  • My.Dear.Juliet
    December 12, 2008
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    Miranda. I love you. End of story.

    • Emm Jayy
      December 12, 2008
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      I'm glad you liked it. Hey. I didn't do shit to him. If he wants to be an ass, then he'll get angry poetry written about him.


      • My.Dear.Juliet
        December 12, 2008
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        Oh. I would have done the same thing, darling.


        • Emm Jayy
          December 12, 2008
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          Glad to know someone else isn't a complete idiot.


          • My.Dear.Juliet
            December 12, 2008
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            Um Thanks? I think thats a compliment...

            • Emm Jayy
              December 12, 2008
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              It is! It is.

              I was trying to state that Chris is being a complete idiot. And that I wasn't being an idiot when writing this poem. And you agree with me so you aren't either.

              It was a compliment. Just a confusing one.

              • My.Dear.Juliet
                December 12, 2008
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                Oh Alright. Lol I wasn't sure.
                Well go with your gut and don't back down.
                That's the worst mistake you can ever make.


  • jules5987
    December 12, 2008

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    Whoa. Your poem definitely represents a myriad of angry emotion. It's great! I was able to see into this pissed off moment you're having.


  • LotusRyda
    December 12, 2008
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    wow that is an angry poem

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