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Dryad of the Silver Woods.

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Swathed in autumn equinox
sunlight paints her hair
Dryad of the silver woods
trespassers beware.

She guards the trees with fierce pride
no harm she lets befall
no sharpened axe or huntsman
has ever come to call.

Fair of face but dark of heart
inside the forest grounds
she will watch them till she dies
as forest life abounds.

Step not yourself inside her realm
or you will taste her breath
as singing and unfeeling
she leads you to your death.



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Prompt Number 49
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  • ForgottenMemories
    December 15, 2008

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    This was so unusual, but quite spectacular.
    I really enjoyed it; the flow and rhyme were perfect and you made it seem strong but it was also beautiful and soft.
    Well done, I loved it!
    Thanks for entering and good luck!
    -ForgottenMemories


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    December 13, 2008

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    Oh nice take on the prompt. Dark and light al in the one. Excellent rhyme and flow again.
    Best wishes in the contest.
    Gaylene


  • lunarlunacy
    December 12, 2008
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    well done, nice rythme.