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Santa

Santa I don't want presents
Or money

Santa I don't want a bike
Or action figures

Santa I don't want to spend lots of money
Or have lots spent on me

Santa I want to be with family
And people I love

Santa I want everything in this world to be right
And no wars

But santa most of all

I want to be happy
And not regretin what I've become

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I was bored and depressed

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  • awannabepoet
    September 1, 2009

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    And so the world was joyfull once more for in the heart of at least one such sensitive and wishfull being there was not more than a simple wish for love and joy to the world.

    Let not the moments seem dark for the simple fact of writing Santa an early request makes you that much less than I would call depressed.





    • B0b
      September 6, 2009
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      thankz mate...its been ages since i wrote this..when i wrote this i was very deep in depression...and i was miles away from my fam so yeah....thankz for the comment.
      cheers bob


  • LovemeNHateme
    July 16, 2009
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    wow

    its short but powerful keep it up


  • Melodies
    December 12, 2008
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    You were bored and depressed when you wrote this, 'lil Sis? It's a fine poem and made me smile. I have the same wish and would be very happy if I could spend Christmas with all of my family. As for regrettin' what I've become, yeah. I get that, too. I have tons of regrets. But every day is a new one and we can learn and change if we try.