Of life has just begun.
Her tiny body
Reminds me
Of an Innocence without guilt
A legacy of Hopes unchained.
A Miracle of life...
Waiting to be sculpted by love.
and
perhaps,
One day able leave her own footprints
Upon another Unborn child.
dragonheart1
Author notes
Prompt: the above picture http://darthpayback.deviantart.com/art/ten-little-toes-67018147
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt #8 by Aussie Gypsy.
1100 points, ended December 20, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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i really like this one.
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Ah, the innocence of a new life
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so sweet and beautiful
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and the soul he or she touched
few words powerful packed with love
of the gift of a child from Gods love
to take an teach them to love an be kind..and to mold them into a man or woman with Gods guiding love
awesome Hun well penned Hugs Angel♥
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Aww this is really sweet i love the picture!
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beautiful
I love it. the emotion in it is just amazing. I love poems that glorify the miracle of a baby.
"A legacy of Hopes unchained.
A Miracle of life..."
just beautiful
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This is so pretty.
I take it that you just had a little girl--- or that you want one soon...
♥
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This is beautiful and very well structured. I love the idea here, it's absolutely inspiring. Excellent!
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thumbs up nice one
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Wonderfully take on the picture. I love it. The babies feet in the hands... AWESOME!!! Thank you for sharing. Keep them coming & I will keep reading. ~~Iridessa MoonFlower~~
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this is a great peom
i love the way you wrote this
thank you so much for sharing
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This grabs the heart and just don't let go... Reminds me of the baby I lost, What would they have been? I love my boys dearly, but sometimes wonder about the one I lost, and this one just kinda reminded me of that one
This is fantastic! and that picture is just amazing! What a read!
and love
Nyetta
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Fabulous!!!
A Miracle of life...
Waiting to be sculpted by love.
Keep it up the good work
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I like this poem its short but beautiful it tells what a child is and how cute they are you did agood job..
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Yep, the Dragon’s got a Heart.
The phrases I like best are, “Innocence without guilt”
and “Hopes unchained”. Speaking as the mother of daughters,
Well done. Linda
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Very beautiful.
I love the whole poem... and esp the line...
"Waiting to be sculpted by love"
A wonderful write, and great take on the pic prompt.
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This is an amazing poem, full of life and hope
Barbara
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Beautiful
My dearest AP hubby,
This poem is truely beautiful.your words are as soft as the babies feet.You have woven much wisdom and insight into your write. Your imagery that is woven within your words is so beautiful and innocent.
Your write should of at least had a H.M award.
Much love and happiness to you always and forever.
Your angel of whispers.
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This is so beautiful, well penned. Gives the reader hope for the future, I will ask just one thing, if you keep entering my contests, please do not use your pen name anywhere. Best to you in the contest
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Beautiful~
Oh My Love how You penned for this image~
Those are some Precious feet
I never get tired of that image~
Excellent and adore the imagery You have exhaled onto this page
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
Best wishes in the contest too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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aw wow this is just so beautiful I love it thank you for sharing some beautiful grace good luck inthe contest my friendmaralisa I loved this poem
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This poem is beautiful, and i the sculpted by love, and that someday she can leave her own footprints... keep writing, ʚiɞ~Amy
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Beautiful
Oh I love this so much and its so sweet those tiny little feet
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