My love is like a flower
My love is like a flower, it may forget to bloom, if you ignore it,
My love is true, take a look into my eyes, and see that my love is pure,
Please don’t choose to ignore it, as it will not bloom and may wilt,
Let my love blossom like a beautiful flower does,
Don’t let it shrivel up and totally die,
Watch it each day opening more and more,
Each day glowing brighter and brighter,
Growing taller and taller, prouder and prouder,
This is my love for you, never forget that,
True, pure love is really hard to find,
So again I urge you not to ignore it,
Let this love of mine into your heart,
Hold tight to it as it may never come about again,
Watch how other flowers do wilt and die,
Not a nice thing to see when this happens,
Always remember a flower is a living thing,
That breaths air just like you and I …
And right now, in my life, this is what I am, is a flower,
So take my love, hold onto it and never let go!
Watch as I blossom more and more each day that goes by.
Namaste Selfexpressive.
A contest entry
- My love... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended December 23, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I agree with the sentiments described...really you are true and very practical in terms of the truth..love it..thanks for wonderful write..well done.. -
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Thank you Prabhu for your kind comments, I truly appreciate them, x
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Love
Like a flower that needs nourihment to blossom. Oh so true poet. But it seems wilt me must in the end. Sweet write.
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Thank you Bob... x
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this is beautiful.
its very effective how you compare your love to a flower - and so pretty. you have some gorgeous imagery throughout, i especially love the lines :
Each day glowing brighter and brighter,
Growing taller and taller, prouder and prouder,
you've put alot of emotion into this, and the reader can clearly see that!
best of luck in the contest you have entered.
ElectricBloom
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Thank you very much for your kind comments ElectricBloom, I truly appreciate them, I do tend to put a lot of emotion into my poems ... its also a way of helping me express myself, many thanks again, x
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