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The Sense I Cannot See

 

 

 

What curious a feeling

inhabiting me now.
Like I've been sailing many miles,

and my ship has run aground.

Even though I'm writhing on a beach

I still feel like I've drowned -

 

a feeling quite phsycotic,

wanna be somewhere exotic

but it doesn't make a bit of sense to me...

 

 

 

A walking talking metaphor

that isn't hard to bind.

A breathing contradiction

that isn't difficult to find.

A complicated riddle

that might just bend your mind --

 

some say that I'm hypnotic;

a little bit erotic

but it doesn't make a bit of sense to me...

 

 

 

A jester and a joker

once made out behind a bar.

Then they stole $1000 dollars,

a mule, a midget and a car.

They ripped off alotta gas as well

but didn't get too far:

 

they were just too alcoholic

a little bit neurotic

but it doesn't make a bit of sense to me...

 

No there isn't that much sense

in this to see....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

To be read to the tune of "The Fellas at the Freakin FCC"
on the Family Guy Episode when Peter gets his own TV station...
featuring the Sideboob Hour....


I never thought that the desire
to carve great beauty
could literally bring me to tears...

and I failed, writing instead a comedic piece, despite my inner
turmoil... it did cheer me up a little...

I guess... this poem accurately describes the truth that...
well, you cant let outside opinions affect you, coz it isn't
fair on you.

What you didn't pick up on that??
Oh well.
Enjoi



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