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You

Was it you who helped me face the day
When in my bed I wanted to stay
Was it you who placed one foot in front of the other
When I thought I couldn't go any further
Was it you who held my hand
When I felt I could no longer stand

Was it you whose light shone on my face
When I came out of that dark and lonely place
Was it you who helped me stand tall
When I first heard you call

It was you and only you my love
Who healed my  broken heart I know
Until we meet again above
I will never ever be alone

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  • Joseph Hollis
    December 15, 2008

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    This has a very spiritual and uplifting feel to it. I enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing and welcome to AP!


  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    December 14, 2008

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    Welcome to Allpoetry

    This is a beautiful piece of poetry that shows that you love someone and they have helped you get through all of your pain.

    It's always a wonderful thing to have someone to love and support us when we need it the most

    Welcome to Allpoetry
    I hope that you enjoy the site, and if you have any questions please don't hesitate to ask



  • superstition
    December 12, 2008

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    Wow, this was extremely well-written all the way through. It flows and rhymes nicely, and it's nice to see sentiments such as this being brought forth. It was that ending stanza that really did it for me - The perfect finish to an already great piece of writing. Nice job!