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Sun Day

In due time
the world will spin
into the sun again

and I'll be waiting to attach the warmth
to my soul.

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It was a journal entry on my live journal, it seemed like a nice, short, abstractly vague attempt at happy thoughts.

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  • thebadguy
    January 27, 2009

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    I like short and sweet stuff. This is the best short poem I have read in a while. Less is more. You obviouly figured that out somehow. And when I say more I mean it overflows ideas like your grabbing them out of a glass that has the same width of your hand. Peace.


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    January 9, 2009

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    Ah..the defining nature in such a mood is a wonderul poetic magic..well devised..and well drafted work of the life..thanks for this sharing..


  • Bite me.
    December 13, 2008

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    I love this.

    Fucking love it.

    Not even kidding.


  • Everwind Rising
    December 13, 2008
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    I like it!


  • peridotPixi
    December 12, 2008

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    this is really cute, i like how you have wrote something so amazing in a short and beautiful poem, i love it, keep writing, ʚiɞ~Amy


  • chilali
    December 12, 2008

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    Ooh! I like very much Kerri!

    Much love
    Ylova

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