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His Story

It all started long ago when I was young and curious....

 

 

 

People watched me and looked away. I had noone in my life. Not one single friend until one day I noticed her and everything changed.

 

I found myself looking at the most beautiful angel I had ever seen but she never noticed me.

 

 

I did everything I could. I dreamed about her, longed for her. Cared about her, and even prayed for her. Many times I pictured us dancing but only to blink right back into reality.

 

 

Inside my hope started fading. I started growing restless. Nothing mattered. I could not eat, I could not sleep. I could not even do my homework.

 

 

 

Years went by. I watched her grow up and become a queen. I saw special moments noone noticed. Like the one day she was alone and walked around the field wishing it would last forever.

 

 

 

Everywhere she went people wanted her picture and signature. Never a moments rest.

 

 

 

One day I decided to leave her be and take a journey. I went some place special that noone knew about.

 

 

 

When I arrived I saw her, and she saw me. She blushed and looked so cute. My heart pounded as she took my hand and we walked. We talked for hours and hours.
Light turned into dark and it was getting cold. As we got to her house she pulled me in.
My wildest fantasy became true as she kissed me. All night long we moaned underneath the covers.

 

 

The day time was like a poisonious drink that one feared. Night ended fast and I had to say goodbye.

 

 

Never again would we be together. Not another kiss not even a hello. It was not meant to be.

 

 

She had to marry a king.

 

 

 

She did everything to him she did to me but with a longing in her eyes that almost everyone else missed but me. Then I knew she loved me....

 

 

My son, your mother took her life. She was not very happy. The letter she left behind was for you. See my son, you are now a prince.
The king she married died shortly after from heartbreak.

 

You will rule the land but remember this....
Love is something that's precious. Never let it fade nor slip away into the hands of someone else....or you will change and turn into someone you hate.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

I used all of the prompts. PhantomsAngel87 gave me permission to not put the credit for each picture in the notes and allowed me to link back to the contest for you to see the author credit. Only because it is 10 pics and that's a lot of links in notes lol. If you have any questions about the author credits link IM me and I'll get it for you if you can't find it there.
Link to the contest: http://allpoetry.com/contest/2430089
I really enjoyed this contest and I hope that you like His Story.

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Comments


  • Desire gold member
    December 26, 2008

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    Woot!!


    Congratulations on Your Trophy win!
    -Throws confetti-
    Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo


    Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
    Best wishes too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Desire gold member
    December 13, 2008
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    Excellent!

    Oh My I Love how You did this and brought forth His Story~ Bravo!
    You are so good at that
    Could not help but smile
    Keep that quill dancing~
    Woo Hoo
    I so Appreciate Your comment on my work too
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet One
    Best wishes too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • chilali
    December 13, 2008

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    WOW! I love this Kari! I absolutely love it. I love how you used all the picture. A superb write for sure!!! This is GOLD! Gold, I tell youuu! Good luck in Manda's contest
    Keep it flowing.

    Much love
    Ylova