Each second in your arms
is a dream come true.
I found a real man
the day that I met you.
I feel so safe
when you are near.
With you in my life
there is nothing for me to fear.
In your arms so strong
as we sleep at night
it feels so good,
it feels so right.
Each momentwhen
your face I see
there's no place on earth
I'd rather be.
So content,
so at peace,
my love for you
shall never cease.
My heart, my body, my love
these things to you I give.
I promise to love & cherish you
for all the days I live.
A contest entry
- Love? by isabellacohen.
550 points, ended December 29, 2008, 24 entries
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Comments
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warm
your writing is lovely and warm and speaks of devotion,
thanks for entering,
best wishes,
Isabella -
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Thanks for having me. Glad you enjoyed it.
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this a beautiful poem, to show and express that Love for you is eternally... I also like the way that you describe "A real man" I hope that as I grow older and mature more, I too will be considered to be a real man from those that meet me! thank you for sharing!!!
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You know you already are a real man. Since we first started talking I've grown to realize that. I pray that one day you'll be able to acknowledge yourself as A Real Man too because you are.
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