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Becomes ...

Where would my road lead
                      If I didn't have
                                          you
              standing by my side...
Stretching out your hand
                                To hold
                            and to guide...
Would I be lost , lost
                        As my words
                            on this page...
Would I struggle to
                      Find the peace
                            To replace the rage....
Where will  this road lead
                  Now that I have
                                        you
Stretching out your hand
                            To hold
And make me a father , a father
                          that has become
                                  A better man ...


A contest entry

http://floriandra.deviantart.com/art/walk-in-the-light-41555589 Credit prompt VII

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Comments


  • Unsigned gold member
    January 8

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    Fantastic write I really enjoyed reading this and spending time on the sentiments invoked...

    Well done

    Good Luck


    Simon


  • Kari gold member
    December 13, 2008

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    Oh cool..your format totally matches the pic. That's very neat. Awesome job and the best of luck to you in the contest.