Somewhere out in the wilderness tonight
The unfathomable seeker lost her way
With visions of gold in her misty sight
She knew that her destiny was yet miles away..
In the black sunset she saw the blood rise
Her silver towers of rules came crashing down
Lost and bruised her empty soul cries
Some hollow tears behind the eyes deep brown..
They think the wanderer has lost her fight today
For her wings are wounded with the endless rain
But somewhere beyond the far, far away
The Soledad will rise to shine once again..
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Author notes
Im still trying to write..
I'm finding myself in a place where I'm left alone with totally unanswered questions. But I hope to find them one day. Maybe sooner
Thank you for reading 
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Excellent Write
You are on your back Soledad and remember there will always be unanswered questions. One answered question is that your writing is well up to scratch. Love the silver towers of rules. Really good poem to read.
Bill
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hmm I enjoyed reading it something so beautiful you get lost into. 1st paragraph describes how insane man is running behind his wild passions, dreams. 2nd states the reward for beloved passions that's painful now and that's what you seek and third was bet filled with courage, hope and stubborness of man, won't give up. Just like a child won't top weaping, more beaten more a loud cry. brilliant work Keep it up lol and Best of Luck
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Wow. Sehrish. This was
Amazing. I loved the rhymes and the imagery. And the title I just love that word. Well done 
Thank you for sharing this with me
Much love
Ylova
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Lovely Lonely!
I also find myself pondering about unanswered questions I have deep within me that seem to linger endlessly.. I doubt they'll ever be answered, but one things for sure, it keeps my mind busy and searching can sometimes be the thrill of it all. The mystery pens good poetry my dear friend, and I can appreciate someone who soul searches, verses someone who remains idle in their thoughts. I sometimes get numb within, but think, think again. lol. Thanks for sharing, it's a blessing relating to you, you
my poetic socks! 
Love Me!
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well my sweet friend this was quite a thrilling writer. I mean this write is very powerful deep and intriguing as well. I just really love the flow as wlel. youe words tings true and the flow is incredible. what also really grabs my attention is how you are seeking your pathway to your destiny I guess you can say but then again who knows. anyw ays just a marvelous write from the hands of a beautiful poet. keep up the good work
Tiger
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