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With All My Heart

Separated by bars
living without your touch
it tears me apart
I miss you so much
Not to see your face
each day when I wake
makes me crazy
makes my heart ache
The more we're apart
the sadder I grow
I love you with all my heart
I just want you to know
I want you to know
that I'm here for you
I'll do almost anything
that you ask me to do
Regardless of what happens
I promise to stay
All I want
is to be your wife some day
Forever & Always
til death do we part
I'll love & cherish you
with all my heart

Author notes

This is about the man I plan to marry. I love him dearly and wish I could hold him, touch him. I miss him so bad.

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  • Ademon
    December 12, 2008
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    this poem would go well in the Love Letter contest that I'm in... very lovely!