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Nightmares

Do you hear us
In the shadows of your thoughts?
Do you feel us
Move with us
Chant to the tunes you dream of?
The songs we wrote for you
Inside you, we are everywhere
Your heart
Your soul
And in your mind, we thrive
Live, breathe
Sing, dance
Speak
Only to you
For we are the ghosts of you
We are dreams, memories
Thoughts
Doubts
Inside you, we live, and whisper to you
We are everything
We are nothing
We are
Nightmares.

Author notes

Written to go with the picture below for an English project. It was fun. Yeah. ^_^ Hope you like!
http://www.arts.state.tx.us/plma/art2/stack/images/img02.jpg

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  • Dlvvanzor
    December 20, 2008
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    Woah. Creepy. Good job!


  • kyuuketsuki ai
    December 12, 2008

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    "The songs we wrote for you
    Inside you, we are everywhere
    Your heart
    Your soul
    And in your mind, we thrive
    Live, breathe
    Sing, dance
    Speak
    Only to you
    For we are the ghosts of you"

    Absolutely mind-blowing. This is definitely one of my favorite recent ones by you and also one of my all-time favs. Brilliant...strong imagery, great word arrangement...*sigh* Lovely.
    <3
    Maria


  • Andiness
    December 12, 2008

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    Woah, very awesome poem and picture...though I must say that I like the poem much better then the picture. What did you get for a grade?? 110%??

    • Celticjedi
      December 13, 2008

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      Yeah, the picture's a little weird, but that's why I like it! xD Thank you for your kind comment, it is very much appreciated. It hasn't been graded yet, but I hope for such a grade. Don't we all?


      • Andiness
        December 13, 2008
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        yah yah, of course!! ^_^ but thats the point of assignments, is it not?! To give us something to hope for XD


  • AllYoullNeverHave
    December 12, 2008

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    I like this... I like this a lot sis! Your interpretation is incredible... This is just... I love this! I love the ending...

    "For we are the ghosts of you
    We are dreams, memories
    Thoughts
    Doubts
    Inside you, we live, and whisper to you
    We are everything
    We are nothing
    We are
    Nightmares."

    That is just... I love it! That's my favorite part right there! Keep up the amazing work. Love you, sis!

    ♥Chelsea

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