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Your Gift

My cost to love you is free.
Your songs to me mean everything.
When life is scary I turn to you for comfort, a solace I can find in no other.
When life is tough your music brings me happiness .
A star so quiet but the brightest in the sky.
The darkness of the night brings stillness to me, I listen to the harmony of your voice.
I wish to feel your breath.
The love I send to you is heat and warmth in the cold.
The sweet lyrics you make I hope someday to know.

Author notes

What's the cost of a gift?
Nothing and everything if the gift is love.

Merry Christmas everyone!
RedSnow.

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  • Beautiful-N-Broken silver member
    February 12

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    I loved this as a whole, it is a wonderful write! The last three lines really stuck out to me and....

    I wish to feel your breath.
    The love I send to you is heat and warmth in the cold.
    The sweet lyrics you make I hope someday to know.

    sounds like the words of true love which is the best gift to give or recieve.

    Great write!


    • RedSnow
      February 17
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      Thank You!!!

      Thank you for the nice comment that's so sweet to hear.

      RedSnow.


  • spirit rising
    February 8

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    i really like this, its vivid and emotional,
    i really feel the last line too, very touching.
    i would suggest changeing the colour of the font though as its abit hard on the eyes to read.
    thanks for sharing


  • Mrs D
    January 16
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    i love the depth of love displayed in this poem .....love how you express how much he means to you ..

    "When life is scary I turn to you for comfort, a solace I can find in no other"

    "I wish to feel your breath.
    The love I send to you is heat and warmth in the cold"

    very powerful lines....

    ps : i dont fancy the background and text colour combo...it tuff on the eyes


  • Umi Juvariel
    January 8

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    The color scheme hurt my eyes a bit, but other than that, this poem was very enjoyable. Oh dear, I am having to squint just to write this, lol. This poem had some sweet lines, and some sad ones, but overall I liked it. Great write.


  • Nothing less
    December 12, 2008
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    ha i would love to get this from a gift from someone important, very nicely penned
    -cael


    • RedSnow
      December 14, 2008
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      Thanks Again!!!

      Thank you for the nice comment on my poem.

      RedSnow

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