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White

Purity, virginal beauty
alabaster skin untried by love

Blinding light, genuine truth
all that is holy reflected within

Racial identity, collar of the elite
unhealthy bread one should never eat

Heat of the coals, bright and intense
no one can stand this fevered rage

So much represented in this color that taunts me,
a blank page so cruel
and white


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  • softest-whispers
    December 21, 2008

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    Interesting penning here, I think I too look at a page to write and see nothing, it's hard to do it as well as some do on here, I am sure you will though

    ~Luce

  • Page Deleted.
    December 12, 2008

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    I liked this piece, especially the closing.

    Thankyou for entering and best of luck.

    Skeletons


  • Cannonsfire
    December 11, 2008
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    Good luck in the contest C


  • Girl-Interrupted gold member
    December 11, 2008

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    i love your take on this girlie!! The blank white page that glares at one before words occur, intimidate...,,

    becc