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Colour study 4 (green)

A canopy of leaves; shelter
lush and alive
The colour of life itself


Basic and elemental
deep and elegant
beauty in nature
purity


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grass to lie on
walk on; support

the quiet hush of seasons coming and going

timeless, precious

green

Author notes

its short and sweet but its green
a continuation of my little colour study
its a muse rather than an actual poem but
take it as you will


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  • Valley Girl silver member
    January 12

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    Awesome write. I really like the imagery. It made me think of a rainforrest or a nice summer day surrounded by trees. This is a creative piece. Excellent job. Thanks for sharing.

  • what an immagery you created here with the depth of the poetic muse ..love it..and thanks for sharing..well done indeed...


  • Flare the Arcphoenix
    December 11, 2008

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    This is actually really cool! ^_^
    'Elemental' is an interesting word to see in a single color study...but it works well here. So does purity, which suprised me; I usually relate it to white, but it works with green too. Also, it has great flow overall.

    Good job! You've still got a knack for writing. ^.^

    --Flare
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