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Deeper, Faster, Tighter.

Now you want to talk to me ?
Well save your breath.
Now you see my outside beauty ?
Your vanity will be your death.

Your sad today.
And as grim as the reaper.
Why cant i love you, you say ?
Next time cut a little deeper.

Do you love me yet ?
No, but your a beautiful disaster.
Did you lose your free will, marionette ?
Next time shoot a little faster.

Your killing her with your words.. cute.
Don't give up though, soon she'll grow lighter.
Stop talking, he doesn't care, just fucking mute.
Next time tie the rope a little tighter.

cut deeper.
shoot faster.
tie tighter. 

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  • xXcrimsionrosesXx
    December 12, 2008
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    that is good like wooow
    your good
    keep writing