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Need Is Calamity's Key

What does it mean
When you smile at me
Does it mean at times
You're thinking of me

Do I dare to believe
This idea I have formed
Could I be walking blindly
Right into a storm

Your smile I decipher
As a chance I could have
But if I were to tell you
You'd probably laugh

You flirt as if you
Like me more than a friend
But you are with her
And I am with him

I am probably just
Deciphering wrong
This friendship we have
Is not a love song

So I will sit here
And you will sit there
And I'll day dream of when
And I'll day dream of where

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  • Papers
    December 16, 2008

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    "You flirt as if you
    Like me more than a friend
    But you are with her
    And I am with him"

    &&

    "So I will sit here
    And you will sit there
    And I'll day dream of when
    And I'll day dream of where"

    ^ My two favorite stanzas. I don't know why, but something about the way that they were written is just magnificent! I should feel extra special because you wrote this one sitting in MY room! I guess I must be your muse or something! xD I'll stop boasting, though. Another beautiful write speaking about your confusion and wanting. Keep up the great work, my bestie!