12/11/08
Star Crossed Lovers?
[move over, Shakespeare]
Fairy Tale Princess?
[out of here, Disney]
Wide Screen Romance?
[Nicolas Sparks, you’re gone]
You’ve all got nothing on us
What did you think
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Nicely done -- quick and sharp and fun!
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Superb
I like the satire of this write. You have created quite an image in my mind through the simple words you used to express your thoughts. This is very well written, indeed. -
Very very nice.
Made me smile
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I think I hear 'love' in the air? And filled with bragging 'writes' at that (smiling). What a wonderful way of expression here. I liked the humor too, by the way.
AsIThink...
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I dont know about sweet, I think it's rather brilliant myself.
Cheeky, I love that.
Love,
Jin
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lol this is cute!
i loved the ending!
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aww, this is so sweet.
so full of love and cuteness ^.^ it's put a huge smile on my face. i like your use of bracets. it's like you're secretly mocking them 'cause they will never be as good as you. very effective.
beautiful write, thank you! i truly enjoyed reading this.
ElectricBloom
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brought a smile to my face
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sweet!
enjoyed it, thanks for sharing!
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Hehe. That made me chuckle. Especially the 'move over, Shakespeare'. And the mixture of humour with love is just perfect. Excellent poem!!
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