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You Should Have Let Me Die

What a fool
I've let you down
Had I kept to the shadows
This regret
This sorrow
Would have never existed
I should have never existed
Not in your life
You kept me living
No favor was returned
I was deadweight
I was...Nothing
You should have let me die...
You should have let me die...
You should have let me die...

Author notes

......He was a great friend...

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  • HatedLoveDieingRose
    December 12, 2008
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    this is a great poem.. very sad,


  • Guerrero
    December 12, 2008
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    no he shouldnt have.. you helped him more than either of you now know..


  • kel dog
    December 11, 2008
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    very sad. but a great write. keep it up. ur just letting your feelings flow. good job.

  • Bob Fox
    December 11, 2008
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    Poet

    So said. and man broken by his own hands ans she still loving you. tragic ending it seems.