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playing with my heart

The dance is going on so well
I see you now across the room
I know you also seen me too
I wait for a wink a smile a stare
You play the game you know
Aint fair
My heart it beats so fast and loud
Then i watch you mingle with the crowd
Then i feel your touch apon my arm
And all the pain i felt is gone
Your body feels like a tone of lead
Your eyes say secretly come to bed
Im lost within your protective grip
My breathing heavy my voice so thick
My arms go lovinly around your neck
My fingers intwine in your brown thick hair
For now your mine and i feel complete
I will love you for as long as you allow
Tonight were lost in a lovers embrace
I kiss your mouth thats full of need
I kiss your neck and hold you close
Tonight i will notwont let you go
You have my love you always did
Stop playing games and let me win

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had to give it agonot sure its what your looking for but had fun wring it cheers

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  • HomeGrown
    December 11, 2008

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    Now that's what I mean when I say pure. Very real, very uncluttered, and very well written. Might want to touch up the grammar a bit, spell check lines 9, 11, and 22. Thanks, and tons of luck in my contest.

  • Bob Fox
    December 11, 2008
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    Lovers Embrace

    And the youthful exuberance of play and love. How very wonderful poet.

    • evelynxxoo
      December 12, 2008
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      have to look up exuberance when i do i will get right back to you these big words i would have to lick the dictionary if not swallow it joke ha ha you get what i mean bob my spelling is so bad it sucks big time