I feel the wine red sunset
that most quiet part of the day
that seems to take all of the fading light
and intensify it
elevating my spirit
calling me to a journey of healing.
An intoxicated spirit flying alone, serene
...and though alone...not lonely
Your words light a flame inside me
inside this simple, ordinary soul
Inspired by the wind of your divine spirit
I drink you in, in this moment, in this hour
I am happy to be
just to be
intoxicated.
Flowing, like the wine red sunset
I follow the light to the bank of a great river
to dip-just a fingertip
and am awed by the sensation.
I follow the song in the wind
becoming mesmerized by the sound
my soul vibrates with the beauty
my physical form cannot contain
...or even name.
I sense the stretching of my being and
I am filled with joy
in the single, perfect moment of...
almost...
reaching
Him.
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The most spiritual moments for me are in the light of the sun or the moon. I feel in tune with earth and universe, a small being, yes, but still a part of this great life. You have put all of this into your poem and it is magical. YOU are magical with your pen and heart, my friend.
Love, L xoxox
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Beautiful!
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The single moment of ones elevation to the highest spiritual connection
A time of untold happines and joy
Written in such a way as to make the reader feel the greatness of the moment
Well done Rhonda
Thank you for your wonderful review
Take care
Nick
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Your poem magnifies the Glory of Him
Well done
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Much appreciation for your comment, friend. Amen and Peace, Rhonda
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inspired
I love the visual imagery. I am a big fan of experimentation of method when it comes to poems and imagery I often find can be ellusive. But great poem.
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Thanks for the visit 'AMuseIn', I appreciate your candor and kind words. Peace, Rhonda
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This is absolutely beautiful with vivid imagery and color. I was able to "drink" this poem in and become intoxicated with your words. Bravo!
Love,
Amera
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Thanks Amera for your sweet comment...bless you. Peace always,Rhonda
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Excellent
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..I am humbled by your single word comment, Sandip...and I thank you greatly...Peace always, Rhonda
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This is beautiful, as the joy from your heart flows here so easily.
I could ramble, but that would take away from what you have written here.
Buddy
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I like it when you ramble..
...thanks Buddy, for stopping by to comment...Love ya! Rhonda
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God alone....to let your spirit flying and find him residing in your heart....is an amazing sensation. a complete union with God ..and everything seems to be so beautiful, when u feel God...even the darkest time is always bright because he will lit up your way. Most amazing, Rhonda....i love your words...they are so precise...
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Carolina...your words mean so much to me...thank you...
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this is
beautiful lady.
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...thanks Swan...
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him or Him
ya vine is great, to be intoxicated is to be the king of time, well said, the beauty of the feelings to be out of the world, well, th last word is ...ok..nice write.
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?...seems you have a Russian accent...'vine'?...lol...Thanks Ahkam, for your 'sveet' comment...Rhonda
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...thank you Prabhu...
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