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Christmas

Christ the savior is born today,

Holy is this gift from God.

Resting in his manger,

Is baby Jesus fast asleep.

Snowflakes falling in the cold,

Tis' the season to believe,

Miracles can happen,

As the lord is our Christmas Miracle

So merry Christmas to all!!!

Author notes

The Vocab. words are: Holy, Cold, Snowflakes, Miracle, Merry. This is a Acrostic poem.

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  • Polaja Greeters member
    December 20, 2008

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    This is a lovely Christmas poem I really like the sentiment that you have expressed here, that the real meaning of Christmas isn't in the presents or material things, but in the spirit of faith, charity, and love congratulations on the gold trophy

    Merry Christmas!

    Polly


  • Anna Emkah
    December 14, 2008

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    Very beautiful. But you knew that already for you have already got GOLD for this one.

    Anna.


  • Midnight Breeze
    December 13, 2008
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    Absolutly Wonderful!!!! You really captured the true meaning of it. Thanks for entering!!! God bless you!!


  • Slick99
    December 12, 2008
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    Christmas

    thank you for entering my contest!!! good luck!!! -Slick

  • Midnight Breeze
    December 12, 2008

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    Wonderful Job!!!!! I absolutely love this!! It is very inspiring and meaningful!!! More people should think like this instead of getting presents. You really captured the true meaning of Christmas and you show allot of talent for such a young writer!! I think this poem really has a chance for 1st and that gold membership, which is very sweet of little feather to give. Excellent Job!! I also like that you wrote the word CHRISTMAS down the side and it all goes together wonderfully!! Excellent Job!!! I wish you the best of luck in the contest!!! God bless you sweetheart!! I really enjoyed reading this!!!

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    December 12, 2008

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    Just beautiful. That's exactly what Christmas is too. It should be about being together and having a good time; not about how many presents you receive. Well done.
    Brian

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