Taking an idea
Making it my own endevour
What have I done here that is so wrong?
I just want to know something unknown
Iterating all of the decisions
That have defined all of my life
What have I done to make me seem emotionless?
When my sadness and levity can paint stars in someone's soft eyes?
All of life's symbols
Like a neon sign in the twilight sky
It seems that I do not know there presence there
But what if I know them like an old friend?
Endless rebellion will continue
While I try to follow God's way
Maybe these things make me so different
But human all the same
It seems that all I do is calculate
That's all there is to know
But maybe you'll be suprised what you will find
When you look into an idiot savant's heart
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ha, at first look at the tital it reminded me of my english class in 8th grade where were discussed what an idiot savant was for half an hour
but besides that it reminds me of my life
awsome write
good luck
-micaela
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