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Christmas Angels Sing

Holy Angels sing,
their Christmas yuletide carol,
In the frosty snow.

Author notes

I wrote this for a contest. The Vocab. words used are: Holy, Angels, yuletide, frosty, and cold. This is a Haiku poem.

A contest entry

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  • Polaja Greeters member
    December 20, 2008

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    This is a lovely haiku I like that you have used the words from the workbank in your poem so well, it doesn't seem forced at all very beautiful - and it just makes me want Christmas to come all the sooner

    Merry Christmas!

    Polly


  • Anna Emkah
    December 14, 2008

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    A beautiful Haiku here. I would delete the comma after the first line, for I think you have to read through there. Maybe you better could put a 'full stop' at the end of the second line.
    You could do without interpunction though and without capital letters at the beginning of the sentences. It's up to you!
    Still, nicely done.

    Anna.


  • Midnight Breeze
    December 12, 2008

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    Beautiful, really beautiful!!! I think this is a very sweet haiku!! I love it!! Your image is wonderful, I can see them in the snow and here their soft, sweet voices. You have a real talent for writing!!! Your work always makes me smile! It always has a beautiful message and is very inspirational!!! I truly love this piece!!!!! Excellent Job and good luck in the contest!! Hope you have a great Christmas!!! God bless you!!!

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    December 11, 2008

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    The angels certainly do sing, don't they?
    Very nice poem. Simple and direct.
    Good luck in the contest and have a Merry Christmas.
    Brian